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torsdag 6 oktober 2011

Date at Mc Donalds

Daniel knocked at her door. The girl’s name was Monica. After s couple of seconds she oppened the door. There he was, Daniel. When he finaly asked her if she wanted to follow him to Mc Donalds she immediately answerd yes. They decided that they were going to Mc Donalds on Sunday. After a short talk Daniel happily went home. When he got home his brother, Ben, started to tease him. After a long fight between the two their mother came in and told them to stop. Of course they both blamed each other.

That Sunday Daniel unfortunately was sick, something that his brother took advantage of. Instead of helping his brother to contact his friend to tell that he couldn’t come he went to Mc Donalds to play a little trick on Daniels friend.

When he arrived he saw someone waving to him. That was obviously Daniels friend. Everything went just fine in the begining. They orderd their hamburgers grabbed a couple of chairs. After a while it become totaly silent. Ben had no idea of what was happening, but something sure was wrong. After a minute of silence the the hamburgers arrived. Then it came: A loud scream that echoed through the room. She screamed: Who are you? Where the **** is Daniel? And with that she walked away. Daniel never heard from that girl again.

1 kommentar:

  1. Good word knowledge and grammar. Write more! Describe people and scenes.

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